100 Word Story – A Space Tragedy (Part Two)

The entire crew had some kind of gripe with the commander, considering his obnoxious attitude and know-it-all behavior.

Although he was of the rank of Commander, everybody felt that he didn’t deserve it, that it was handed to him on a silver platter.

And after dealing with him for long enough, some of the crew members finally decided to do something about him.


“I can’t stand that bastard Lenny. He swears he’s the golden child of the I.G.F.”

Quartermaster Yasain did a gagging impression at the mention, “Anytime I hear his name I just want to throw up my lunch. And that damn cologne he puts on—Ugh!”

Laughing and copying the impression, Lah-Mal grabbed her stomach and pretended to hurl.

However, the playful acts came to an abrupt halt when they both heard the break room door sliding open. Freezing in place, Lah-Mal and Yasain watched the doorway to see who entered.

Storming in, cursing under his breath, was First Officer Diamond.


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